Monday, Dec.9 ~ Forbidden Words

First, give me feedback and advice
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Review

• Review STEAL chart.
• Map your story by the plot structure. 

Some good writing tips...

• https://www.scribendi.com/advice/five_habits_to_avoid_in_fiction_writing.en.html
• Check your story for any of these. 

Journal 42: Lame words

Come up with three synonyms for each of the lame words below. 

• Nice
  Very
  A Lot
  Such As
  Stuff/ thing
  Something
  Really
  Plus
  Even
  Just
  Like
  Got
  Get
  Kid
  said 
  So
  Why
  It
  
  

Now take a minute to read whatever you have written of your short story and eliminate the forbidden and lame words.

HW: Short Story Rough Draft due tomorrow!!! 

• Digital version is okay.
• You must have at least two full pages in MLA format to get full points.

Journal Checks on Friday

• Check over these if you have time today.