Monday, October 19

Tuesday 10/20/15 ~ How do you "TIE" a quote into the text?

MEMORIZE
Matthew 5:2-12
and He began to teach them, saying:
3Blessed are the poor in spirit, for theirs is the kingdom of heaven.
4Blessed are those who mourn, for they will be comforted.
5Blessed are the meek, for they will inherit the earth.
6Blessed are those who hunger and thirst after righteousness,
for they will be filled.
7Blessed are the merciful, for they shall be shown mercy.


BLOOD BROTHERS
  • Discuss Ch.10
  • Journal 22A: Please record notes on the TIE Method.
    • EQ: How can I incorporate quotes in a fluid way that uses the quote to build momentum rather than in a way that interrupts the text of my essay? 
                TIE METHOD Tag it, Introduce it, or Embed it.
      • TAG: Tag the context to the end of the quote.
        • Example: "[Elias] blurted, 'Let's pray together'" when he met the defensive Responsible, because he knew that he could not reason with someone in such an emotional state (155). 
      • Introduce: Introduce the context of the quote to lead into the text.
        • Example: Elias shows his reliance on spiritual means to convince the Responsible when he prays rather than discusses: "Where I got the nerve I hardly knew, but I blurted, 'Let's pray together'"(155).
      • Embed: Embed the quote inside of the context sentence.  
        • Example: When Elias writes about meeting the Responsible he explains, "Where I got the nerve I hardly knew, but I blurted, 'Let's pray together'," showing that he relied on spiritual methods to change the situation rather than his own logical reasoning (155). 
      • Puctuation Notes: Notice in the Tag section that only part of the quote was used and that [Elias] was added for clarity. You may add words for clarity within a quote by using the brackets too. Also, notice that the introduced quote can use a colon because the first sentence before the colon is a complete sentence. 
  • Journal 22B: Write a paragraph response to one of the three questions below. Please include a quote using the TIE method.
    • How did Elias gain the authority to speak into the lives of people in town? 
    • What word would you use to describe the way that Chacour deals with the Responsible throughout Ch.10? Is this the wisest way to deal with him? 
    • Why do you believe Elias is willing to take such high social risks in his work with the people of Ibillin?
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the Knesset in Jerusalem, Israel
HW: Journal 23 (Due Block)Finish reading Ch. 11 and write a paragraph using the TIE method to include at least two quotes in the answer to ONE of these questions below. 
  • What kinds of risks are implied for Elias in his choice to lead a march to the Knesset (Israel's legislature located in its capitol, Jerusalem)?
  • How has Elias changed in Chapter 11? 
  • Why does Bishop Raya refuse to lead the march? How is he correct? 
  • Do you believe the march was successful? 

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